[FONT face="Arial Narrow"]Many of the poems seem to surround regrets, guilts, speculations and observations that inspired much sympathy. To me they are a progression from utter guilt and depression to making amends and saying goodbye to past faults.
Some of your poems have what sound like conversation breaks, and some look and sound like deliberate run-on stanzas that depict live pictures as in "(??) Time is Passing" and the language of a distressed mind as in "Escape from Freedom" and "Sleep Well and Wake". If the effects were intended, I applaud at your success.
Your misspellings seem to justify themselves. Some seem to be for phonic effects and some I daresay, for pun (ie. Is it naught but a tombstone and worms); some appear as if highlights (ie. dieing, thier's) that invite contemplation of the real meaning of the words that have long lost their expressive powers.[/FONT]
[FONT face="Arial Narrow"]Regarding one of your themes that I presumed, I think some events are inevitable--they would take place one way or another, sooner or later. When they happen we don't always choose the right action. This is human.
"i'll see what thier's to see
or not to see"
The way you misspelled "thier's" It feels as though things are going to look wrong whether or not this person makes the effort to see. If that was intended, I love your expression.
And overall, I appreciated your poems.[/FONT]
