Poetic Drivel

Started by Orik, Dec 04 06 12:24

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Orik

#15
Dec 17 06 07:06
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

Orik

#16
Dec 21 06 11:41
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

q4l

#17
Dec 21 06 11:48
Same old death rattle. click...click....click...

mr pomegranate

#18
Dec 22 06 02:10
I posted a rather in depth analysis of one of your poems at the 'As Promised' link, in case you are interested...

mr pomegranate

#19
Dec 22 06 10:53
was my artistic impression of the piece bang on or not???

Orik

#20
Feb 17 07 12:06
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

tenkani

#21
Feb 17 07 12:10
Hi, Mr. Orik.
Are you here?
I hope you don't mean that poem literally.
 
For thou art with me; thy cream and thy sugar they comfort me
Thou preparest a carafe before me in the presence of Juan Valdez
Thou anointest my day with pep; my mug runneth over
Surely richness and taste shall follow me all the days of my life
And I will dwell in the house of coffee forever.

Orik

#22
Mar 12 07 05:51
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

Orik

#23
Apr 05 07 11:48
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

ForShure

#24
Apr 06 07 05:04
Fantastic poem.  How is the book publishing coming along?  Anything I can do to help out?  I'm pretty good at editing and proofreading.  

E_E_D

#25
Apr 06 07 09:06
[FONT face="Arial Black"]LOL


Raging Poodle and x could one of those as well [/FONT]  

Orik

#26
Apr 08 07 12:06
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

i wish

#27
Apr 08 07 04:25
EED, the frog is wise.
"Blind respect for authority is the greatest enemy of the truth, " Albert Einstein.

Orik

#28
May 08 07 06:42
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.

Orik

#29
May 08 07 11:28
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Never give up Never surrender Fight with ur last breath Fight 2 live & Fight 2 survive. Never say never & never say die. There comes a time when all will die A time we transcend & attain our place afterlife. My Fight is not yet done, I'm tired & I'd like to go home, But I'm not ready to go just yet.
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