My newest poetry inspired

[Orik]

My dear friend
 Even when the sky is dark
 When things look bleak
 Look up and find what you seek
 See that light. dawn is breaking
 New days, means new rays
 
 With the rising of the sun
 Comes new hope
 Though things seem dark & gray
 Angels watch over you
 They share your pain
 
 You are in my heart
 My thoughts & in my prayers
 Through this time of sorrow
 You have shown me you care
 
 My friend you have eased
 Me through this heartache
 I want you to know I care.
 God be with & Bless you
 
 Written By
 Devan Standsfore Peace
 Monday October 29 2007
 
 Angels make fine friends
  Found in the strangest of places
  So many people, so many faces
  You my friend, are a angel
  I am thankful to have met you
 
  I never knew what was there
  Blind I have been, to blind to see
  The compassion you showed to me.
 
  Through my heartache & heartbreak
  You have been true
  My friend Theses angels
 
  This Hug & kiss are for you
  Thank you for being you.
  Thank you for being true
  My friend I love you.
 
  Written By
  Devan S. Peace
  Mon. Oct. 29, 2007
 
 
 
 pics to be posted soon
 
 
     

[Orik]

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[Russ]

Good to see you around Orik!

[Orik]

thanks russ

good to still be kicking around...  some more words from me...  hope ur feeling better now russ.

this piece is yet untitled....  perhaps u care to help me find a title

( i am contemplating the title)  

" shadows of insight "

[font color="midnightblue" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" size="2"][span class="spnMessageText" id="msg"]Darkened silence
a everlasting abyss
to taste that one last poisonous kiss
to embrace, that grim specter of fate
to pass to the realms beyond once more
to pray i never awake

Silence is all you get.
Alone & bereft.
The grave is my mistress
i hear her call to me
To her i shall crawl.
my heart is broken once again.
love is fickle at best.
this sorrow pains me
deep within my chest.
remember me.
why did u not say goodbye.
forgive me

Love is a complicated thing.
in order to love and be loved.
one must deal with the heartache's and the heartbreaks.
with happiness comes sorrow.
with joy comes pain.
one day i may fall in love again.[/span][/font]
 

[Russ]

I am thanks Orik..

Um, I think its best left for you to choose your titles.. Im not exactly any good at poetry or such stuff, and you are best suited to know what you feel it should be.

Hope you had a good weekend.

[Lil Me]

Orik!  Glad to see you posting again.  Hope you're feeling better, my friend.
 
 
   

[lazy orik]

feeling much better... new drugs and all u know slowly healing and recovering... almost back to full health.. just wish the damn itching of the leg would stop...  i hate scabs they r so slow to heal

any one got good cheap bed bug solutions ?

 and a spare shark steamer ?  i got bugs damn the eastside ...



 

[Orik]

damn this itch its driving me mad
insane i say neosporin apllied again
goldbond damn this shit dont work
red and swollen my foot
good lord doc what's this stuff
applie once a day 1 little tube
sighs it works
no more itch.
but my bitch
120 bucks !



 

[Vivek Golikeri]

Orik, this poetry is sweet and uplifting. Thank you for sharing it with us all.

[Orik]

thanks vivek. mostly its just dark and morbidly deppressing

 

[Orik]

Light sets in to shadow
The night arises soon
Stars shine down
Moonlight on a city

Seeing a persons pain
saddens me
hearing peoples laughter
gladdens me.

My sorrow leads to tears
My heart beats in fear
Alone & sitting here
I ponder on the magnificence
Of mice of rice of man & sky

The night is waning and the sun starts to arise
defeated and yet a new day is greeted
Where to go and what to do
alone & wondering why.
sitting here
am
I





 

[Gopher]

Orik! It's so good to see you back again. I've been wondering about you and how you were.

[Russ]

Gopher wrote:
<DIV>Orik! It's so good to see you back again. I've been wondering about you and how you were.</DIV>


I agree. GOOD to see you around again Orik.
How are you doing? I hope things are going well for you.
Let us know how you are doing.

[Orik]

Alive and above ground.

Still have no work &amp; am not finding much =(

Surviving on welfare and food banks.

My right wrist still hurts something awful it throbs constantly I can barely write with it since I busted it up last month. It keeps me awake and if i roll on it in my sleep wakes me up. not even the very strong painkillers i take numb the pain. if i take more pain killers I can't think so it is a choice suffer the pain or take enough pain killers to kill the pain but then you get to doped up you can't think...

Basically my life sucks...


 

[Gopher]

However, you don't!