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Title: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Orik on Oct 29 07 04:25
My dear friend
 Even when the sky is dark
 When things look bleak
 Look up and find what you seek
 See that light. dawn is breaking
 New days, means new rays
 
 With the rising of the sun
 Comes new hope
 Though things seem dark & gray
 Angels watch over you
 They share your pain
 
 You are in my heart
 My thoughts & in my prayers
 Through this time of sorrow
 You have shown me you care
 
 My friend you have eased
 Me through this heartache
 I want you to know I care.
 God be with & Bless you
 
 Written By
 Devan Standsfore Peace
 Monday October 29 2007
 
 Angels make fine friends
  Found in the strangest of places
  So many people, so many faces
  You my friend, are a angel
  I am thankful to have met you
 
  I never knew what was there
  Blind I have been, to blind to see
  The compassion you showed to me.
 
  Through my heartache & heartbreak
  You have been true
  My friend Theses angels
 
  This Hug & kiss are for you
  Thank you for being you.
  Thank you for being true
  My friend I love you.
 
  Written By
  Devan S. Peace
  Mon. Oct. 29, 2007
 
 
 
 pics to be posted soon
 
 
     
Title: Ttles r. angel of light and a angels kiss
Post by: Orik on Oct 29 07 04:41
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Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Russ on Oct 29 07 05:18
Good to see you around Orik!
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Orik on Nov 04 07 05:07
thanks russ

good to still be kicking around...  some more words from me...  hope ur feeling better now russ.

this piece is yet untitled....  perhaps u care to help me find a title

( i am contemplating the title)  

" shadows of insight "

[font color="midnightblue" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" size="2"][span class="spnMessageText" id="msg"]Darkened silence
a everlasting abyss
to taste that one last poisonous kiss
to embrace, that grim specter of fate
to pass to the realms beyond once more
to pray i never awake

Silence is all you get.
Alone & bereft.
The grave is my mistress
i hear her call to me
To her i shall crawl.
my heart is broken once again.
love is fickle at best.
this sorrow pains me
deep within my chest.
remember me.
why did u not say goodbye.
forgive me

Love is a complicated thing.
in order to love and be loved.
one must deal with the heartache's and the heartbreaks.
with happiness comes sorrow.
with joy comes pain.
one day i may fall in love again.[/span][/font]
 
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Russ on Nov 04 07 06:39
I am thanks Orik..

Um, I think its best left for you to choose your titles.. Im not exactly any good at poetry or such stuff, and you are best suited to know what you feel it should be.

Hope you had a good weekend.
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Lil Me on Nov 04 07 06:45
Orik!  Glad to see you posting again.  Hope you're feeling better, my friend.
 
 
   
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: lazy orik on Nov 19 07 09:24
feeling much better... new drugs and all u know ;) slowly healing and recovering... almost back to full health.. just wish the damn itching of the leg would stop...  i hate scabs they r so slow to heal

any one got good cheap bed bug solutions ?

 and a spare shark steamer ?  i got bugs damn the eastside ...



 
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Orik on Nov 25 07 07:38
damn this itch its driving me mad
insane i say neosporin apllied again
goldbond damn this shit dont work
red and swollen my foot
good lord doc what's this stuff
applie once a day 1 little tube
sighs it works
no more itch.
but my bitch
120 bucks !



 
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Vivek Golikeri on Jun 07 08 08:32
Orik, this poetry is sweet and uplifting. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Orik on Jul 07 08 12:40
thanks vivek. mostly its just dark and morbidly deppressing

 
Title: Setting Dawn
Post by: Orik on Dec 02 10 12:58
Light sets in to shadow
The night arises soon
Stars shine down
Moonlight on a city

Seeing a persons pain
saddens me
hearing peoples laughter
gladdens me.

My sorrow leads to tears
My heart beats in fear
Alone & sitting here
I ponder on the magnificence
Of mice of rice of man & sky

The night is waning and the sun starts to arise
defeated and yet a new day is greeted
Where to go and what to do
alone & wondering why.
sitting here
am
I





 
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Gopher on Dec 02 10 02:11
Orik! It's so good to see you back again. I've been wondering about you and how you were.
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Russ on Dec 02 10 08:57
Gopher wrote:
<DIV>Orik! It's so good to see you back again. I've been wondering about you and how you were.</DIV>


I agree. GOOD to see you around again Orik.
How are you doing? I hope things are going well for you.
Let us know how you are doing.
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Orik on Dec 03 10 04:48
Alive and above ground.

Still have no work &amp; am not finding much =(

Surviving on welfare and food banks.

My right wrist still hurts something awful it throbs constantly I can barely write with it since I busted it up last month. It keeps me awake and if i roll on it in my sleep wakes me up. not even the very strong painkillers i take numb the pain. if i take more pain killers I can't think so it is a choice suffer the pain or take enough pain killers to kill the pain but then you get to doped up you can't think...

Basically my life sucks...


 
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Gopher on Dec 04 10 10:40
However, you don't!
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Tatertot on Dec 04 10 04:31
 Orik wrote:
My right wrist still hurts something awful it throbs constantly I can barely write with it since I busted it up last month. It keeps me awake and if i roll on it in my sleep wakes me up. not even the very strong painkillers i take numb the pain. if i take more pain killers I can't think so it is a choice suffer the pain or take enough pain killers to kill the pain but then you get to doped up you can't think...

Sorry to hear about your wrist Orik.  I've broken mine in the past and know how incredibly painful it is. You never realize how much you twist your hand about until you can't do it anymore. (//forums/richedit/smileys/Sad/9.gif)

Good wishes headed your way from a complete stranger.  (//forums/richedit/smileys/Happy/14.gif)  [input id="gwProxy" type="hidden"][!--Session data--][input onclick="jsCall();" id="jsProxy" type="hidden"][div id="refHTML"][/div]
Title: Re: My newest poetry inspired
Post by: Orik on Aug 01 12 01:10
Should it be we who are to die

We fight for what we want, We Fight to win. We fight to survive. We fight to stay alive.
We fight for what we believe. We fight against tyranny. We fight against injustice.
We fight for our right to live free. We pledge to die if we must.

Should it be we who are to die. Be it by arrows swift flight Or should it be we are to die by Crossbows bolt. Should it be we who are to die be afraid ? I say No, We are not afraid!

Should it be that we die by Mages spell, or should it be we are to die by the warriors blade. Shall we be afraid? No! No! I say. We few that live free, we fight for our right to die as free men for we are not anyones slave.

Shall we fear the call of the grave? Nay! Nay! I say, We fear it not this day... For I know why we fight, we fight for our rights. We fight for our right to be here. For our right to stand free beneath the sun, the stars & the forrests canopy. We fight & shall die to stand free beneath the moon in the nights sky.

Look out across the plains do you not see the clouds that float tranquilly by. Should it be this is the day that I die? Free men are you & I, look out at that majestic blue sky and tell me dost that tree bow before man? Nay it does not & neither shall I. But gladly say I, that here I will bend my knee. To give thanks, praise to the Creator above & my Mother below.

I am a free man. For, I stand in peace at one with the Great Spirit at one with the wind that rushes through the Willows. I watch & see the tree that won't bend in the wind, break, as I watch the tree that bends survive...

If I have learned one thing one bit of wisdom & that I share here this day, today and tomorrow and tomorrows, tomorrow. for they to shall see me standing strong, free & brave.

For I have learned to conquer my fears.

I accept that one day, hopefully not anytime soon, that I to shall answer the call of the Grave & become one with the earth my Mother and give back to her as she gave to me.

Never look back in regret look to the future for it is here & it is today. Will you be the tree that bends or the tree that breaks ?

Just what is it you fear? For all will answer that call of the grave there is no escape. Life is temporary

fear = slavery = death

acceptance = freedom
freedom = tranquility = peace

peace of soul & peace of mind.

Tuesday July 31 2012
Written by Devan Aka Orik Aka Evail Frog