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My newest poetry inspired
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My dear friend
Even when the sky is dark
When things look bleak
Look up and find what you seek
See that light. dawn is breaking
New days, means new rays

With the rising of the sun
Comes new hope
Though things seem dark & gray
Angels watch over you
They share your pain

You are in my heart
My thoughts & in my prayers
Through this time of sorrow
You have shown me you care

My friend you have eased
Me through this heartache
I want you to know I care.
God be with & Bless you

Written By
Devan Standsfore Peace
Monday October 29 2007

Angels make fine friends
  Found in the strangest of places
  So many people, so many faces
  You my friend, are a angel
  I am thankful to have met you
 
  I never knew what was there
  Blind I have been, to blind to see
  The compassion you showed to me.
 
  Through my heartache & heartbreak
  You have been true
  My friend Theses angels
 
  This Hug & kiss are for you
  Thank you for being you.
  Thank you for being true
  My friend I love you.
 
  Written By
  Devan S. Peace
  Mon. Oct. 29, 2007
 
 

pics to be posted soon


   
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Ttles r. angel of light and a angels kiss
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« Reply #2 on: Oct 29 07 04:18 »
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Good to see you around Orik!
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« Reply #3 on: Nov 04 07 05:07 »
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thanks russ

good to still be kicking around...  some more words from me...  hope ur feeling better now russ.

this piece is yet untitled....  perhaps u care to help me find a title

( i am contemplating the title) 

" shadows of insight "

Darkened silence
a everlasting abyss
to taste that one last poisonous kiss
to embrace, that grim specter of fate
to pass to the realms beyond once more
to pray i never awake

Silence is all you get.
Alone & bereft.
The grave is my mistress
i hear her call to me
To her i shall crawl.
my heart is broken once again.
love is fickle at best.
this sorrow pains me
deep within my chest.
remember me.
why did u not say goodbye.
forgive me

Love is a complicated thing.
in order to love and be loved.
one must deal with the heartache's and the heartbreaks.
with happiness comes sorrow.
with joy comes pain.
one day i may fall in love again.

 
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I am thanks Orik..
Um, I think its best left for you to choose your titles.. Im not exactly any good at poetry or such stuff, and you are best suited to know what you feel it should be.
Hope you had a good weekend.
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« Reply #5 on: Nov 04 07 06:45 »
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Orik!  Glad to see you posting again.  Hope you're feeling better, my friend.


 
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« Reply #6 on: Nov 19 07 09:24 »
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feeling much better... new drugs and all u know ;) slowly healing and recovering... almost back to full health.. just wish the damn itching of the leg would stop...  i hate scabs they r so slow to heal

any one got good cheap bed bug solutions ?

 and a spare shark steamer ?  i got bugs damn the eastside ...



 
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« Reply #7 on: Nov 25 07 07:38 »
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damn this itch its driving me mad
insane i say neosporin apllied again
goldbond damn this shit dont work
red and swollen my foot
good lord doc what's this stuff
applie once a day 1 little tube
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no more itch.
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« Reply #8 on: Jun 07 08 08:32 »
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Orik, this poetry is sweet and uplifting. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
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« Reply #9 on: Jul 07 08 12:40 »
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thanks vivek. mostly its just dark and morbidly deppressing

 
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