Orik
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My heart is filled with tears.
Current mood:  distressed
Category: Writing and Poetry My heart is filled with tears.
Sorrow is all I know and have to give.
I want to Die and yet I live
Dear God: I scream, I shout,
Dear God what do you say.
The unfairness of life.
The troubles and strife.
How does one hold on, to hope
When that last ray of sun is gone.
When the rain falls down
Dear God: I scream, I shout,
Dear God what do you say.
When the trials and tribulations begin.
When your money runs out.
When your children go hungry
What what does a family do.
When prayer has failed
Dear God: I scream, I shout,
Dear God what do you say.
When your country has no welfare.
When no medical aid exists
When your dieing at home
What do you do.
Dear God: I scream, I shout,
Dear God what do you say.
When a girl not much older than 16 turns a trick
Acts out some dirty scene in front of a wall.
My eyes fill with tears they continue to fall...
How unfair. how unjust.
Dear God: I scream, I shout,
Dear God what do you say.
What loving God can allow
These girls to do what they must
I scream, I shout, I sit back and cry.
My heart is filled with sorrow
Maybe things will be better tomorrow
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Orik
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Sweet Memories written by me
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it is not often a song makes me weep with abandon but this song sung by this woman had me shedding tears... |
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I miss the sunshine
cold wet and dreary
rain sure makes a grown man weary
i sigh and wonder when will it be back
sunshine i do lack
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Sure is quiet and this thread slowly sinks back in to obscurity...
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tap dance lessons on the moon |
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its gunna happen just make it easier on urself u cant resist me smell my musk smell my dirty musk and tell me u liek it
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Daughter Of Eve
A girl of grins
In the dark night
Mindful of man's sin
You are a delight.
Jizel, a impudent lass is she.
Filled with a spark of life
Even the angels hearken
to hear her laugh.
This mischievous girl
So kind, so sweet, is Jizel
More graceful, than any gazelle
Jizel you astound me & confound me
Your sister Jenn
She is a mystery to me
I know her not so well
Your leaving & traveling away
Makes a part of me glad
and yet I'm so sad.
To say good-bye, my dear lass
To the good, remembrance past
I can only say
I shall miss you
A little more
With each passing day
Time draws nigh
soon you will leave
I will have to say goodbye
My wishes go with thee
A prayer for thy safety
May your travel
Be swift, pleasant & safe
May we meet once more
By the redeemers grace
Remember me, as I remember you
Jizel, My dear friend
God Bless You.
Written by
Devan S Peace
March, 25, 2008
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Lil Me
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Hey Orik! *waves*
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"And the sun is shining...in this rainy city!!!!!!" -TROOPER
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Hey Orik! Hope alls well with you. |
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People who say it can't be done should not interrupt those who are doing it.
Birth is merely the beginning of death
My mom says Im #1
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Orik
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Hello lil me waves back. howdy russ. im fine thanks. just took a extended break from all the forums to spend time on me. mostly working, reading, playing video games, etcetra.
bye for now.
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Orik
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writers block. how i hate it, how u all must love it. lol
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Orik, your poetry is absolutely artistic and enjoyable. I myself am a writer and a poet, and some of my poems have been published in anthologies. You might also look up the poetry of Linda Eve Diamond on the internet. She's my friend and lives in the same neighborhood where I live. Linda is the author of "Listeners, Unite!" Her books are as full of common sense wisdom as those of Dale Carnegie and Norman Vincent Peale. Good luck, Orik....you deserve success! |
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wow thank you vivek i am so used to people not liking my poetic free verse. i am blushing at ur kind comments. if u were logged in, i would positively bless you. you made my day .  |
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Orik
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Day after day
fight after fight
so much trouble
so much strife
mahal i love u so this fighting
make me feel
so bad
so alone
so sad i know u work hard for ur girls
and i am ashamed
my actions my words
i am to blame take what u want and what u need
i am so tired of these fights
maybe you know better than i
what they do and what they need
i still don't think it's right
but who am i to say
just how much you pay my heart it hurts
ever so much so
broken and crying
i come back for more i storm, yell and rage
yet you stoically
stand their ever so brave
you don't fight back
and i feel so bad yell at me call
me some names
say Devan u ass
give me a slap
damn that hurt
i needed that sighs i am ever so tired of this fight
but you my love
i still want you as my wife |
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